How are wire transfers (money transfers) sent? Find and photograph some electronic part of the network that handles wire transfers.
While researching and looking for an electronic part of the network that handles wire transfers, I was concerned on what I should exactly look for. I knew of many online websites that were used to complete wire transfers such as PayPal and could see no point of the electronic network that made these money transfers possible. My next thought was to visit a Western Union store or a local bank. Yet while at these locations, all that seemed to be used electronically concerned a credit card or bank account number and a computer. My best guess on an electronic part used in all of this would be a sign up online.
Through the approach of a technological determinist, I believe that the use of money transfers to be done so simple and fast has created a cultural phenomenon of online shopping and a “get it now” mentality. When wire transfers became possible, people may have been skeptical and went only to their bank branches to expend money from their account to send to another party. Yet as technology developed, more and more people began to approach online payments as safe and easy. In order to complete a wire transfer, some steps are needed to be taken. First, you must contact the third party you want to carry out the wire transfer. Second, you must give the name of the person you want to send money to, a routing number, your account number, your phone number, and the address of the location of the recipient’s bank. Third, you must decide what amount of money you wish to send and by when to send it. After this, the wire transfer is ready to go. All that is left to confirm is if the money has been received by the recipient. The simplicity and electronic functioning of wire transfers have allowed people to send and spend money faster than ever, making a consumerist culture.
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comments about wire transfers
By mrodri64Ellen,
I enjoyed reading your blog post. There are some comments about this blog post below.
Several assignments for the class require photos. This photo is too small and does not look to be an original photo nor of an electronic part of the network. For your assignments to get good grades, this has to be fixed here and in future posts that require photos. If you are having trouble with your camera or uploading the pictures, this is something we can help with. You can also borrow a digital camera from the Undergraduate Library (or a friend) if the one you are using is the problem. I worry that a lack of attention to details like this one distracts attention from your arguments.
Additionally, the blog post should have a creative title related to your topic. Be inventive.
Part 2 describing the process of locating how wire transfers are sent electronically seems as though there could have been more effort made to find the object. Perhaps talking to a representative at Western Union that might have described the process. There should be some extra steps involved here.
The last paragraph should be edited. The sentences on how a wire transfer is done should be moved to Part 2, leaving only the technological determinist account.
Overall, the blog post should be developed more. This means formatting issues such as the photo and organization, but also editing Part 2 by including more information. This should make the post more effective.
I look forward to reading the revised blog post.
-Max